對比型作文結(jié)尾段

一比較型作文

（一）比較型作文一般分為說明式比較和議論式比較兩種。

說明式比較在比較過程中，作者不發(fā)表個人意見，在文中不體現(xiàn)個人取向，單純以說明介紹為目的。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣，闡明自己立場為目的，一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。

（二）比較論說文一般有兩種模式：

1．首段：明確擺出自己的立場。主體部分：通過運用比較，對比等手段，進(jìn)一步說明自己取向或偏好的原因及正確性。結(jié)尾段：重申立場。

2．首段：只引出現(xiàn)象，對個人觀點予以保留。體部分：進(jìn)行對比。結(jié)尾段：自然而然地得出論點

作文題目

1.MakingFriendswithPeopleofsimilarordifferentpersonalities?2.AdvertisementorQualityofProducts?3.LivingAloneorLivingwithRoommates?4.CompareUrbanAreaswithRuralAreas5.ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively?6.CompetitionorCooperation?

7.BookKnowledgeorPracticalExperience?8.CommunicatingbyTelephoneorbyLetter?首段

I.首段=引言句+主題句

引言句：引出比較的對象，主題句：提出主題，明確表明作者的個人取向或偏好。引言句一般為與作文題緊密相關(guān)的社會背景，現(xiàn)實狀況或是時下人們對某一事件或事物的普遍取向或偏好。主題句則開宗明義，明確提出作者的立場，觀點，取向或偏好。

II.首段常用句型

1.Itiswidelyaccepted/anundeniablefactthat----Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-----Thereisnodobtthat------Itistruethat----

-----aregettingtheirwaysintoourdailylife.

E.g.Itiswidelyaccepted/anundeniablefactthatmoderntechnologyhasbenefitedhumanbeings.

2.Nowadays,therearesome/differentwaystodo---,suchasAandB.Butwhenitcomesto---

E.g.Nowadays,therearetwowaystoentertainourselves,suchaswatchingTVathomeandgoingtomovieswhenwearefree.

3.Withtherapiddevelopmentof…,..….is/areplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartin…today

4.Therehasalwaysbeen/usedtobeaheateddiscussionoverwhetherAismoreimportantthanB.

5.ThosewhoareinfavorofAhavetheirownreasons,whileothersargue/contendthat---.Somepeopletendtofavor---,but/while/meanwhile/onthecontraryothers-----.E.g.Somepeopleprefertravelingalone,butothersliketravelingwithfriends.

6.AlthoughA----,IlikedoingB---

Despitethefactthatamajorityofpeopletendto/preferto--,I’minfavorof---Iagreewiththeformeronesomehow.

Inmypointofview,Ilikeoutdoorexercisesmuchmorethanindooractivities.

E.g.AlthoughmanypeopletendtofavorTVprogram,Ilikegoingtomovies.

E.g.Despitethefactthatamajorityofpeopleprefertotraveltogetherwithfriends,I’minfavoroftravelingalone.

7.Butinmyopinion,bothAandBareessential.

Personally,IprefertostrikeabalancebetweenAandB.Asforme,I’minfavorofacombinationofAandB.IprefertocombineAandB.

AandBareofthesame/equalimportance.

WhileIattachmuchimportancetoA,Iwon’tgiveupanychancetodo----

E.g.WhileIattachmuchimportancetoindooractivites,Iwon’tgiveupanychancetotakepartinoutdooractivities.

（五）模板

1.Itisgenerallyacceptedthat-------areanindispensablepartofourdailylife,butwhenitcomesto-------,therehassprungupaheateddiscussionasto-----.Asforme,Ipreferto--------

2.Peopleallknowthat-------isveryimportant,however,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowards------.Somepeoplesaywe’dbetter--------,onthecontrary,othersbelievethatwewould----------.ButasfarasIamconcerned,Ipreferabalancebetweenthetwo.

3.Itisoftendifficultfor--------todecidewhetherAorB.However,immyopinion,Aisalwaysbetter.

4.ThosewhopreferAhavetheirownreasons,whilesomeotherpeoplepreferB.Asforme,bothAansBhavemeritsanddemerits.

5.Whichismoreimportantinlife,-------,or-------?Theanswermayvaryfrompersontoperson.Butinmyopinion,theyofthesameimportance.

6.-----isveryimportantbothinthepastandpresent.Withthedevelopmentof----,----.

(Communicationisveryimportantbothinthepastandatpresent.Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,letterscanbesentmuchmorequicklythaneverbefore,butwhenthetelephoneappeared,mostpeoplehaveturnedtoit.)

7.-----aregettingtheirwayintopeople’slives.ThosewhoarefavorofAarguethat----whileotherpeoplethink-------.

8.Nowdays,theinfluenceof-----provestobeprofound.Andtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateasto-------.

對比型作文結(jié)尾段落

模式一結(jié)尾段=呼應(yīng)主題句+強調(diào)被肯定事物的積極作用等

1.Iprefertravelingindividually,becauseformetohaveaholidaytouristoenjoyandrelaxmysylf,andtorelaxthoroughly,freedomisofessence.Ifyoulosethefreedomofaction,itisnolongeraholidayinanythingbutname.

2.Fromtheabovecomparisonandcontrast,wecancometotheconclusionthatthecityisstillabetterchoiceforchildren’seducation,thoughsomedisadvantagesdoexist.Onlyincitiescanchildrenbewellpreparedfortheirfuturelifeandkeepupwiththetrendoftheworld.

3.Iregardroomingtogetherasapreciousopportunityforitisthebestwayoflearningcooperationandunderstanding.AndIconfidentlybelievethatsuchexperiencewillbehelpfulinone’slaterlife.

4.Therefore,Istronglyadvocatecommunicatingbyletter.Anditwillprovetobeoneofthewaystobeindependentfromtelephonewhenyoupickupyourpentowritealetter.

5.Inaword,determinationisthekeytosuccess.Withastrongdeterminationonecannotonlybringhisopportunitiesintofullplay,butconquerwhateverhardshipsordangershemayface.

6.Inaword,thebestchoiceisagoodmajoratagooduniversity,butwithoutgreateffortswecanhardlygetsuchachoice.Ifwecannotobtainboth,inmyopinion,thefirstthingtoconsiderisagoodmajor.

常用句型

1)Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors/GiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined/Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Nowaftercloseexamination/Forthereasonsgivenabove,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusion/wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusion/Iprefer/Istronglyrecommendthat___.

2)Inmyopinion,weshouldplacemuchemphasisontheimportanceof___.3)Inshort,Isupportthestatementthatitisbetterto____because____.

模式二結(jié)尾段=讓步句+呼應(yīng)主題句

1.Indooractivitiesaresomewhatchallengingaswell,forexample,chessandbookreadingcanalsodevelopourmind.HoweverIstillpreferoutdooractivities,fortheyteachmehowtobeastrongman,bothinhealthandinspirit.

2.Ofcourse,travelingalonehasitsownmerits:youcanchangeyourdestinationatanytimeandstayinoneplaceaslongasyoulike.ButIstillliketotravelwithfriends,becauseIthinkthatthemostimportantthingduringtravelistogetpleasureansrelaxation,andwithfriends,Icangetallthesethingseasily.常用句型

1)Inspiteofthesaidadvantagesof____,Iwillchoose____

2)Ofcourse,____hasitsmerits.ButI’mstillinfavoroftravelingalone___.

3)Both____and____havetheirownadvantages.Forexample,____,while____.Comparingthosetwo,however,Ipreferto____.

中立型結(jié)尾段=呼應(yīng)主題句+一句話總結(jié)（總結(jié)所比較對象最突出的優(yōu)點，可用while,whereas連接）

1.Ipreferabalanceoftheseactivities.Inmyopinion,physicalrecreationisnecessaryforgoodhealthbutintellectualpursuitsprovidemorepleasure.

2.Bothbookknowledgeandpersonalexperienceareessential.Whileexperiencemakesonemoreresourceful,bookknowledgemakesonemorelearned.

Therefore,weneedboth___and___.Theformer___,andthelatter___

3.Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright.Whenwe…weshouldtakeintoconsiderationallaspectsoftheproblemsandthenmaketherightdecision.

4.Personally,Ithinknothingwillbesorewardingthancombiningselectivereadingandextensivereading.Asfarasbadbooksareconcerned,weshouldneverreadthem,butasforgoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan..

5.Inmyopinion,weshouldbothreadselectivelyandextensivelyaswell.Withbadbooks,weshouldneverreadthem,butforgoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan..

6.Despitethefactthatthemajorityofpeoplepreferadvertisements,I’minfavorofagoodcombinationofadsandqualityofproducts.Onlyinsuchawaycouldwepromotethesalessuccessfully.

7.Inaword,wemustlearntobebothcooperativeandcompetitiveinordertosucceedinlife.Whatweneedtolearniswhentobecooperatioveandwhentobecompetitive.Thesecretof___liesinthecombinationofboth___and___.

擴展閱讀：比較型作文

201*英語四級寫作訓(xùn)練(二):比較型作文之1

來源：日期：201*-10-06閱讀

21次作者:NB

比較型作文之8分作文

比較型作文一般分為說明式比較和議論式比較兩種。說明式比較在比較過程中，作者不發(fā)表個人意見，在文中不體現(xiàn)個人取向，單純以說明介紹為目的。

在四、六級考試中的比較型作文多以議論式比較的形式出現(xiàn)。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣、闡明自己立場為目的，一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。

一、傾向型比較論說文

1.、首段=引言+主題句

引言句（第一句）：引出比較的對象

主題句（第二句）：提出主題，明確表明作者的個人取向與偏好。2、主體部分

對比點的筆墨分配：應(yīng)有所側(cè)重，對于作者持否定態(tài)度的事物的優(yōu)勢要少寫，而肯定的事物的優(yōu)點則要多用筆墨，對于其缺點則可輕描淡寫、一筆帶過。3、結(jié)尾段=呼應(yīng)主題句+強調(diào)被肯定事物的積極作用等第一句：呼應(yīng)主題句

第二句：可以用一句話歸納被肯定事物的優(yōu)點等。

結(jié)尾段=讓步句+呼應(yīng)主題句

第一句：以讓步的口吻，提出被否定事物的一個小優(yōu)點第二句：筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，用一句話歸納并突出被肯定事物的重大優(yōu)點，進(jìn)一步確定自己的選擇，與主題句相互照應(yīng)。

二、中立型比較論說文

首段和主體部分與傾向型比較論說文相同，而結(jié)尾段一般采用簡化總結(jié)模式：結(jié)尾段=呼應(yīng)主題句+一句話總結(jié)第一句：呼應(yīng)主題句

第二句：總結(jié)所比較對象最突出的優(yōu)點，可用while，whereas連接萬能模板：

傾向型

1.有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)住宿應(yīng)該獨處一室2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該與同學(xué)合住3.我的觀點

Itisoftendifficultfor______todecidewhetherAorB.Inmyopinion,Aisalwaysbetter.

Somestudentsdon"tlikeB.First,theythink______because______.Second,_______.Third,_________.TheincomparableadvantageofAisthat

___________.First,___________.Second,________.Third,________.IregardAasapreciousopportunityforitisthebestwayof___________.AndIconfidentlybelievethat_______.中立型1.有人喜歡鄉(xiāng)村生活2.有人喜歡都市生活3.我的觀點

ThosewhopreferAhavetheirownreasons,whilesomeotherpeoplepreferB.Asforme,bothAandBhavemeritsanddemerits.

Firstandforemost,__________.Moreover,____________.Lastbutnotleast,_______.

Onthecontrary_________.Inaddition,___________.What’sthecommonest,________

Either___________ora_______gives_________.Ibelieve__________

引出不同觀點:

1、People’sviewson…varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat….However,othersbelievethat….人們對…的觀點因人而異.有些人認(rèn)為…..然而其他人卻認(rèn)為．．．

2、Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson…人們對…可能會有不同的見解.

3、Attitudestowards(drugs)varyfrompersontoperson.人們對待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異.

4、Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto…關(guān)于….人們的觀點大不相同.

5、Differentpeopleholddifferentattitudestoward(failure).對(失敗)人們的態(tài)度各不相同.結(jié)尾：

1、Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat…

把所有這些因素加以考慮,我們自然會得出結(jié)論…

2、Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…

考慮所有這些因素,我們可能會得出合理的結(jié)論…

3、Hence/Therefore,we’dbettercometotheconclusionthat…因此,我們最好得出這樣的結(jié)論…

4、Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫無疑問,跳槽有優(yōu)點也有缺點.

5、Allinall,wecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.

總之,我們沒有…是無法生活的.但同時,我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現(xiàn)的新問題.

比較型連接詞：like,similarly,likewise,inthesameway,inthesamemanner,equally.

比較型常用句型：

1．Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.2．TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.

3．AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...4．Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...5．Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.6．Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.7．AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.8．AbearssomeresemblancestoB.

9．However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.10.AandBdifferinseveralways.

11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.12.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.13.ThesameistrueofB.

14.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.

15.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults(obviousdefects)are...

四六級考試加分句型：

1.It作先行主語和先行賓語的一些句型。Shehadsaidwhatitwasnecessarytosay.

2.強調(diào)句型。Itisnotwhorulesusthatisimportant,buthowherulesus.

3."All+抽象名詞"或"抽象名詞+itself"(very+形容詞)。Hewasallgentlenesstoher.

4.利用詞匯重復(fù)表示強調(diào)。Acrimeisacrimeacrime.5."something(much)of"和"nothing(little)of"

"somethingof"相當(dāng)于"tosomeextent"，表示程度。在疑問句或條件從句中，則為"anythingof"，可譯為"有點"，"略微等。""譯為毫無"，"全無"。"muchof"譯為"大有"，"notmuchof"可譯為"算不上"，"稱不上"，"littleof"可譯為"幾乎無"。somethinglike譯為"有點像，略似。"

Theysaythathehadnouniversityeducation,butheseemstobesomethingofascholar.

訓(xùn)練:提綱：

1.有人認(rèn)為類似于因特網(wǎng)的高科技產(chǎn)品會代替書籍2.有人認(rèn)為傳統(tǒng)的信息產(chǎn)品書籍不會被取代3.我的看法。

這也是模板哦！

Nowadays,theinfluenceof____________provestobeprofound.Andtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateasto___________.(引出話題和爭論，但保留作者個人看法)

Peopleinfavorof_________alwaysprovidethefollowing

evidence.Firstly,__________.Secondly,__________.Finally,____________.（偏愛書籍的理由）

Conversely,asforthemeritsof___________,inthefirstplace,________.Secondly,____________.Atthesametime,__________.(英特網(wǎng)等現(xiàn)代科技的優(yōu)點)

Inshort,Iagreethat_________.（明確提出觀點）大家可以選一段練習(xí)

具體要求：

首段：引出關(guān)于因特網(wǎng)對現(xiàn)代社會的影響+關(guān)于因特網(wǎng)和書籍話題存在的爭論

主體段落一：有人偏愛閱讀傳統(tǒng)信息媒體，如書籍原因1：人類文明的歷史就是書寫的歷史原因2：人們可以隨處用自己喜歡的姿勢閱讀原因3：書寫形式更有利于安全保存信息主體段落二：如因特網(wǎng)之類的現(xiàn)代技術(shù)手段的優(yōu)點

優(yōu)點1：新科技的出現(xiàn)歷來都回給人類生活帶來許多好處優(yōu)點2：電腦新科技的出現(xiàn)，使信息儲備量大大提高優(yōu)點3：電腦新科技的出現(xiàn)，使信息處理的效率提高了結(jié)尾段:：因特網(wǎng)最終會代替書籍等信息手段

參考答案：

Nowadays,theinfluenceofInternetprovestobeprofound.AndtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateastowhetherornotInternetwillreplacethebookasthemainsourceofinformation.

Peopleinfavorofthetraditionalinformationsourcesalwaysprovidethefollowingevidence.Firstly,thehistoryofhumancivilizationisthewrittenhistory.Secondly,peoplearefreetochooseanypostureandplacethatmakesthemcomfortablewhenreading.Finally,traditionalinformationsoureceslikebooksarerelativelystableandreliabletopreservethehumaninformationwell.

Conversely,asforthemeritsofmoderntechnologies,inthefirstplace,inhistory,wecanseethateverynewtechnologybringsaboutgreatchangestoourlife.Secondly,moderntechnologylikecomputersisanothergreatinventionthatcanstoreahugeamountofdata.Atthesametime,Weareabletoprocessthedatamorerapidlyandaccuratelythanwecaneverimagine.

Inshort,Iagreethatmoderntechnology,suchastheInternet,willcomedayreplacethewrittenwordasthemainsourceofinformation.Therefore,Iameagerlylookingforwardtothatday.

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