初三寫(xiě)作總結(jié)歸納

初三寫(xiě)作總結(jié)歸納

學(xué)生在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中常常出現(xiàn)很多錯(cuò)誤。下面我們對(duì)一些常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤進(jìn)行了歸納，并對(duì)一些典型的病句實(shí)例逐一加以分析，希望能對(duì)各位同學(xué)有所幫助。

一、“漢語(yǔ)式”英語(yǔ)

例：Hisfather’sbodyisstrong.他父親身體很好。

正：Hisfatherisstrong.

二、難詞解釋

例：thetimefellsleeping就寢時(shí)間

析：同學(xué)們遇到要表達(dá)的術(shù)語(yǔ)有難詞時(shí)，想不到用合適的單詞來(lái)表達(dá)，于是就鬧出了這樣的笑話。因此，在平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中學(xué)生們就要知難而進(jìn)，想方設(shè)法記憶必要的單詞，同時(shí)增強(qiáng)解釋的能力，只有這樣才能提高英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)能力。

正：thesleepingtime

三、單詞堆砌

例：Ourgotoschooltimeis8:00.上學(xué)時(shí)間是8:00。析：同學(xué)們?cè)跁?shū)面表達(dá)中應(yīng)盡量使用自己熟悉且有把握的習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)，不能憑著自己的中文習(xí)慣主觀臆造句子，否則不可能做到“語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，得當(dāng)”。

正：Wegotoschoolateight.

四、時(shí)態(tài)的誤用

例：Shelikeitverymuchandreadsittotheclass.她很喜歡它并且讀給同學(xué)們聽(tīng)。析：在書(shū)面表達(dá)中，應(yīng)根據(jù)上下文或時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)來(lái)確定動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。

正：Shelikeditverymuchandreadittotheclass.

五、用詞錯(cuò)誤

例：Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.昨天他給我一個(gè)非常好的建議。

析：advice表示“建議”時(shí)，是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用不定冠詞來(lái)修飾，而應(yīng)用apieceof。

正：Hegavemeapieceofverygoodadviceyesterday.

六、一致性錯(cuò)誤

所謂不一致不僅指主謂不一致，它還包括數(shù)的不一致、時(shí)態(tài)不一致以及代詞不一致等。

例1：Onceonehavemoney,hecandowhathewanttodo.人一旦有了錢，他就能想干什么就干什么。

析：one是第三人稱單數(shù)，因此本句的have應(yīng)改為has。同理，want應(yīng)改為wants。

正：Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewantstodo.

例2：Waterwillboilat100℃.水在100℃沸騰。

析：表示客觀真理的句子，其謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

正：Waterboilsat100℃.

七、修飾語(yǔ)錯(cuò)位

英語(yǔ)與漢語(yǔ)不同，同一個(gè)修飾語(yǔ)置于句子中不同的位置，句子的含義就有可能發(fā)生變化。

例：Icandance.Itoocansing.我會(huì)跳舞，也會(huì)唱歌。析：too一般位于句尾，不能用于句首。

正：Icandance.Icansingtoo.或Icandanceandsingtoo.

八、結(jié)構(gòu)不完整

在口語(yǔ)中，交際可借助手勢(shì)、語(yǔ)氣、上下文等來(lái)理解結(jié)構(gòu)不完整的句子�？墒菚�(shū)面語(yǔ)就不同了，句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整會(huì)令句意表達(dá)不清。這種情況常常發(fā)生在主句寫(xiě)完以后，作者又想加些補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明的時(shí)候。

例：Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.Forexample,byTVradio,newspaperandsoon.有許多方式來(lái)了解這個(gè)社會(huì)，例如通過(guò)電視、廣播、報(bào)紙等等。

析：本句后半部分Forexample,byTV,radio,newspaperandsoon不是一個(gè)完整的句子，僅僅是一些不連貫的詞語(yǔ)，不能獨(dú)立成句。

正：Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaperandsoon.

九、懸垂修飾語(yǔ)

所謂懸垂修飾語(yǔ)是指句首的短語(yǔ)與后面句子邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清。

例：Attheageoften,mygrandfatherdied.在我10歲時(shí)，我祖父去世了。

析：attheageoften只指出10歲時(shí)祖父去世了，但沒(méi)有說(shuō)明是“誰(shuí)”10歲時(shí)。按一般的推理不可能是mygrandfather。

正：WhenIwasattheageoften,mygrandfatherdied.

十、詞性誤用

“詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為：介詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用，形容詞當(dāng)副詞用，名詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用等。例1：Fewpeoplecanaroundtheworld.很少人能周游世界。

析：around是副詞，這里誤當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用。

正：Fewpeoplecantravelaroundtheworld.

例2：Theplaceisdanger.這個(gè)地方危險(xiǎn)。

析：danger是名詞，這里誤用為形容詞。

正：Theplaceisdangerous.或Theplaceisindanger.

十一、指代不清

指代不清主要指代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清，或者先后所用的代詞不一致。

例1：Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.瑪麗和我姐姐很要好，因?yàn)樗�要她做她的伴娘�?/p>

析：此句讓讀者無(wú)法判斷兩位姑娘中誰(shuí)將結(jié)婚，誰(shuí)將當(dāng)伴娘。

正：Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid.

例2：Helpyourselftosomedrink,boysandgirls.孩子們，隨便喝些飲料吧。

析：句中的boysandgirls和反身代詞yourself指代不一致。正：Helpyourselvestosomedrink,boysandgirls.

十二、間斷句子

我們不能把兩個(gè)或兩個(gè)以上的句子簡(jiǎn)單地連結(jié)起來(lái)，應(yīng)注意連結(jié)時(shí)應(yīng)加上適當(dāng)?shù)脑~。

例：Therearemanywayswegettoknowtheoutsideworld.我們有許多方式來(lái)認(rèn)識(shí)外面的世界。析：這個(gè)句子包含了兩層意思：Therearemanyways以及wegettoknowtheoutsideworld，簡(jiǎn)單地把它們連在一起就不妥當(dāng)了。

正：Therearemanywaysforustogettoknowtheoutsideworld.

十三、累贅

語(yǔ)言以簡(jiǎn)潔為貴。能用單詞的不用詞組;能用詞組的不用從句或句子。

例：Exceptthefactthatheislazy,Ilikehim.除了他很懶外，我喜歡他。

析：本句中的thefactthatheislazy是同位語(yǔ)從句，我們按照上述“能用詞組的不用從句”的原則可以將其改寫(xiě)為：

正：Excepthislaziness,Ilikehim.

十四、不連貫

不連貫是指一個(gè)句子前言不對(duì)后語(yǔ)，或是結(jié)構(gòu)上不暢通。

例：Thefreshwater,itisthemostimportantthingsoftheearth.淡水是世界上最重要的東西。

析：Thefreshwater與逗號(hào)后面的it不連貫，同時(shí)it與things在數(shù)方面不一致。

正：Thefreshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld.

十五、綜合性語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤

所謂“綜合性語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤”，是指除了上述十幾種錯(cuò)誤之外，還有諸如時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫(xiě)等方面的錯(cuò)誤。

擴(kuò)展閱讀：中考作文歸納

201*中考英語(yǔ)作文疏理歸納10大分類)

1突發(fā)事件(自然災(zāi)害、流行疾病等)2.身心健康3.環(huán)境保護(hù)(水、土、大氣等資源保護(hù))4.語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)5.興趣愛(ài)好6.寫(xiě)人記事7.旅游和介紹地方

8.新生事物評(píng)價(jià)(互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物，手機(jī)等)9.夢(mèng)想和未來(lái)10.煩惱一、突發(fā)事件問(wèn)題典型例句：

1．one+of+形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù)TheearthquakethathappenedinWenChuanin201*isoneofthebiggesteventsinChina2.It"sourdutytodosth(我們有責(zé)任去做某事)

3.As….aspossibleWeshoudhelpthemasmuchaspossible.（盡可能地…）4.therebe…..Therearelotsofthingswecando.(我們有很多可以做的事情)5.Weshoudkeepcalminsteadofbeingafraid.我們要保持冷靜而不能害怕。6.make+sb+形容詞Itmakesmanypeoplehomeless.

7.too…to=so…thatTheyaretooyoungtolookafterthemselves8Manypeoplelosttheirrelativesandtheirhomes.(失去了親人和家園)9AlltheChinesepeoplefeelquitesorrow.（感到悲傷難過(guò)）10volunteertodosth自愿做某事…volunteertohelpsb.

11raisemoneyforthem,\\…buysomethingforthem,

12…gotheretocomfort(安慰)thesadchildren.\\Thousandsofsoldiershelpthemtosavetheirrelativesandrebuildtheirhomes(重建家園)\\Evenforeignfriendsalsogivethemahand.(給他們以幫助)13Iamdeeplymovedbythesepeople.(深受感動(dòng))

14SoI’llusemypocketmoney（零花錢）tobuysomefoodandschoolthingsforthechildren15Ithinkallofusshouldtryourbesttohelpthemtogetoutofthetroubletogether.（盡力幫他們走出困境）

二、健康問(wèn)題典型例句：

1.Hereismyadviceabouthowtokeephealthy/fit.(以下是我的關(guān)于如何保持健康的建議)2Itisveryimportanttokeephealthy./Howcanwekeephealthy?（保持健康）3.Wecan"tgotosleeptoolate.Wecan"tstayuptoolate。

4.Weshouldeatthefoodhealthily.(吃健康飲食)5.Weshoulddomoreexercise(多做運(yùn)動(dòng))suchasplayingballgames、running、swimmingandjumpingrope(繩子).

6.LastTuesdayIgotacoldandhadapaininmyhead./hadaheadache.(感冒并頭疼)7.Ididn"tfeellikeeatinganything.（不想吃東西）

8.Inthedoctor"soffice,thedoctorlookedovermecarefully.(仔細(xì)給我做了檢查)

9.Hesaid:"Nothingserious."Andhetoldmetotakeagoodrestanddrinkmorewater.(好好休息并多喝水)

10Thedoctoraskedmetotakethemedicinethreetimesaday。（告訴我每天吃三次藥）11Afewdayslater,Ifeltbetter.(好多了)

12Thenyoushouldpayattentiontoyourdietormeals.（注意飲食）

13Donteattoomuchmeatandsugerbutmorevegetablesandfruit.（不吃太多的…而是多吃…）14Third，youneedenoughsleeporrest.keepyourselfhappy.（保持心情愉快）15…arebadforyourhealth.(對(duì)身體有害)

16Todaymanyteenagersareunhealthybecausetheydolessexercise,（缺乏運(yùn)動(dòng)）eatmorejunkfood,andtheyusuallydonothaveenoughtimetosleep.

17Firstly,wemustkeeptakingexerciseseveryday(每天堅(jiān)持運(yùn)動(dòng)),andeatlotsoffruitandvegetables.

18Secondly,trytosleepforabout8hoursanight,andrememberto“earlytobedearlytorise”.（每天盡量睡8小時(shí)，記得要早睡早起）

19inally,stayawayfromcigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品.（遠(yuǎn)離。。。）

20Besides(除此之外),don’tforgettobreathe(呼吸)thefreshairintheopenair(戶外).Keephappyeveryday.（保持心情愉快）

21Weknowthatsomeofourstudentsdonotlikeeatinglunchatschoolbecausethefood

isn’tdelicious.Sotheyoftengooutofschooltobuysomethingwhichtheyliketoeat.（因?qū)W校的飯不好吃，一些人去校外買吃的）

22ButImafraidthatitisbadfortheirhealthtoeatlunchoutsidetheschool,(擔(dān)心去校外吃對(duì)身體有害)becausesomeofthefoodtheybuyisn’thealthyenough.（買的食品不健康）23Inmyopinion,ifourschoolswantmorestudentstobebackandenjoylunchinside,they

shouldmakethefoodmoredelicious,andalsotheyshouldofferourstudentsalargerchoiceoffoodaswell.（也）（學(xué)校想讓更多的學(xué)生在校園內(nèi)吃午飯，那就要給學(xué)生多做幾種好吃的飯菜供他們選擇）

24Thatismyadvice.Ihopeyouarehealthyandenjoyyourlife.（以上是我的建議，祝身體健康、生活愉快）

范文1Allofuswanttobehealthy.First，weshouldgetenoughsleepduringthenight.（睡眠要充足）Wecangotobedearlyandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.Second,wemusthavetherightkindsoffood.Weshouldeatmorefruitandvegetablesandlessmeat.（多吃蔬菜水果少吃肉）Weshoulddrinkalotofwater.（多喝水）Weshouldhavehealthyeatinghabits.（健康飲食）Third,weshoulddomoreexercisetobuildupourbodies.（多鍛煉增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)）Finally,weshouldwashhandsbeforemealsandbrushourteethtwiceaday.（飯前洗手每天刷兩次牙）Ifwedon’tfeelwell,weshouldgotoseethedoctoratonce.三、關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)問(wèn)題典型句子：水的方面

1.Itisveryimportanttotakecareofourenvironment（關(guān)注環(huán)境非常重要）

2.Theenvironmentaroundusisbecomingworseandworse（我們周圍的環(huán)境越來(lái)越糟）.3.Butsomepeopledontcareaboutit(不在乎).

4.Asweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman,(水對(duì)人類重要)

5.wecantlivewithoutwater.（沒(méi)有水不能生存）

6.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.（適合飲用的水越來(lái)越少）

Onethirdoftheworld"speopledon"thaveenoughcleanwater.（世界上三分之一的人沒(méi)有足

夠的干凈水飲用）

7.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.（污染嚴(yán)重）

8.Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.（必需采取措施制止污染了）

9.It"sourdutytoprotectourenvironment（tosavewater.）保護(hù)環(huán)境（節(jié)約水資源）是我們的責(zé)任垃圾方面現(xiàn)象和具體的做法10Everypersoninourcitymakesabout1.8kilosofrubbisheveryday.（城市里人均每天制造垃圾1.8公斤）

11Ifeveryonemakessomuchrubbish,onedaywemayliveinaworldfilledwithrubbish.

若人人造出那么多的垃圾，早晚有一天我們可能會(huì)生活在充滿垃圾的世界

12Somepeoplethrowthewastepaperabout（到處亂扔廢紙）13Isuggestrubbishshouldbeputintodifferentkindsofdustbinsorpaperbags.建議把垃圾放

進(jìn)分門別類的垃圾箱或紙袋里，Weshouldnotthrow/droplitterontotheground。（扔垃圾）

14Recycleusefulrubbish.（回收有用的垃圾）Plentyofrubbishcanberecycledlikecans,

paper,bottles,andsoon.Ithelpstoprotecttheenvironmentinthisway.（用這種方式有助于環(huán)保）.Wemustpickupsomerubbish（撿垃圾）andthrowitintoadustbin。扔到垃圾箱里

15Weshouldnotspit（吐痰）inapublicplace/cutdownthetrees。（砍伐樹(shù)木）

大氣/噪音污染現(xiàn)象和具體的做法

16Themostserioustwoarewaterpollutionandairpollution,(最嚴(yán)重的兩種污染是。。。)17becausepeoplecan"tlivehealthilywithdirtywaterandpollutedair,neithercananimals.

（人類在有污染的大氣和水的環(huán)境中不能健康的生存，動(dòng)物也一樣）

18Moreandmorediseasesarecausedbypollutedair.（越來(lái)越多的疾病是由于大氣污染導(dǎo)致的）19Ithinkfactoriesshouldnotpourdirtywaterintotheriverdirectlyorproducemorewaste

gas.（不應(yīng)該把臟水直接倒進(jìn)河里去或產(chǎn)生廢氣）

20Peoplearedisturbed(或troubled)quiteoftenbykindsofnoises.(人們常被各種噪音所干擾)

21That"swhy+陳述句（那就是。。。的原因）.That"swhysomanypeopleprefertoliveinthecountrysideratherthanliveinthenoisycity.（那就是人們寧可住鄉(xiāng)村也不愿住城里的原因）

具體該怎樣做？

22reesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus.Weshouldplantmoreflowersand

trees。（多栽花植樹(shù)）

23Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthyin

thefuture.（為了將來(lái)生活得更好更健康，我們應(yīng)該多植樹(shù)

24We"dbettergoonfootorbylikeinsteadofbycar,（最好以步代車）becausemorecars

meanmorewastegas.（車輛多意味著產(chǎn)生更多的廢氣）Weshouldmakeourworldmoreandmorebeautiful.

25Isuggestallthefactoriesandcarsshouldn"tmaketerriblenoises.（我建議。。。）

Iftheymaketerriblenoisethatisn"tallowed,（若他們非法制造噪音的話），they

willbefined（被罰款）,andwecanalsoproducethecarswhichcan"tmaketerriblenoise.（我們可以生產(chǎn)沒(méi)有噪音的汽車）

26Whatsmore,itwouldbebetterif,wecangotoschoolonfootorbybike

insteadofbycar（而且，如果我們以步代車上學(xué)就更好了）

27wecanuseclothbagsinsteadofplasticbagswhenwegoshopping（用布袋

替代塑料袋）andwecanusebothsidesofthepaperwhenwewrite.(使用紙張的兩面)

28Inaword,ifeveryonepaysmoreattentiontoourenvironment,therewillbe

lesspollutionandourliveswillbebetter.（總之，若人人關(guān)注環(huán)境，污染就會(huì)減少，我們生活就會(huì)更好）29Itseveryonesdutytoloveandprotecttheenvironment.(關(guān)愛(ài)環(huán)境人人有責(zé))If

everyonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,（若人人對(duì)環(huán)保貢獻(xiàn)一份力量），theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.

30“Thereisonlyoneearth”,Ihopeeveryonewillprotectourenvironmentwell.

四．語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)典型例句：

1MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish.(超過(guò)4分之3的網(wǎng)絡(luò)信息是用英文寫(xiě)的)2Itisusedbytravelersandbusinesspeopleallovertheworld.（被…使用）3WehavealotoffunintheEnglishclass.(愉快)4OurEnglishteacheroftenmakesushappyintheEnglishclass。（開(kāi)心）

5IhopeIcangoabroad(出國(guó))oneday,andthenIcanspeaktoforeignersinEnglish。6.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglish.Butattheverybeginning(在最開(kāi)始的時(shí)候),listeningseemedalittledifficultforme.（似乎對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)有點(diǎn)難）

7．SoIhavebeendoingalotoflisteningpractice,（做了大量聽(tīng)力練習(xí)）suchaslisteningtotapes,watchingEnglishTVprograms.

8AndIfounditreallyhelpedalot.（確實(shí)管用）

9Infact,therearesomemorehelpfulwaystolearnEnglishwell.（其實(shí)，有更多有用的學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的方法）Forexample,IenjoysingingEnglishsongsandIwanttojoinanEnglishcluborfindapenpalfromEnglish-speakingcountries.

10learnEnglishbydoingsth.（通過(guò)…學(xué)英語(yǔ)）如：lookingupwordsinadictionary（查字

典）

11.Iknowitisnteasytolearnaforeignlanguagewell,butIhavesomeideasthatmayhelp.（學(xué)好一門外語(yǔ)不容易，我有一些或許有用的建議）

12Firstly,itsveryimportanttolistentotheteachercarefullyinclass（課堂認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講很重要）andmakesomenotes（做筆記）sothat（為了）youcangooveryourlessonslater.（過(guò)后復(fù)習(xí)）

13Secondly,trytocatcheverychancetopracticespeaking,bothinandoutofclass.（盡量抓住課堂內(nèi)外一切機(jī)會(huì)練習(xí)說(shuō)）Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakes（別怕犯錯(cuò)誤）.What’smore,you’dbetterplanyourtimewellandstudyitregularlyeveryday.（安排好時(shí)間有規(guī)律的學(xué)習(xí)）14MakefulluseofeverychanceyouhavetopracticespeakingEnglish.(充分利用一切機(jī)會(huì)說(shuō)英語(yǔ))

15Aboveall（最重要的是），youshouldbeconfidentinyourself(有自信)anddontgiveup(放棄)wheneveryoumeetwithdifficulty(遇到困難).Imsureyou/Iwillsucceedthrough(通過(guò)…而成功)your/myhardwork.（最重要的是，你/我要有自信，無(wú)論何時(shí)遇到困難都不要放棄。我相信通過(guò)你/我的努力一定能成功）

16Ibelievethatnothingisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.（世上無(wú)難事只怕有心人）

Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.(有志者事竟成).

五、興趣與愛(ài)好

1.Iama15-year-oldstudentinjuniorGrade3.ThoughIamoccupiedwith(或Imbusywith)mystudy(被…占滿了時(shí)間，…很忙),Iwouldliketospendtimeonmyhobbies,suchasplayingthepiano,surfingtheInternet.2.Oneofmyfavouritehobbyisreading.Readinghasbeeninmylifeformanyyears.Itcannotonlykillthetime(打發(fā)時(shí)間),butalso,moreimportantly,helpimprovemycomprehensionability(有助于提高理解能力)andopenmyeyes.Whenreading,Icanlearnalot.(學(xué)到很多東西)ReadingShakespear’sworks,IknowhowHamletlookslike.ReadingLuXu,IcomebacktotheoldtimeofChina.

Readingreallyaffectsmylife.(影響我的生活)haveagoodinfluenceon…(對(duì)…有良好的影響)3Differentpeople,differenthobbies.Whathobbiesdoyouhave?Myhobbyissinging.It’sagreathobby!Itsfunanditmakesmefeelproud.(它有趣而且讓我感到驕傲).SingingmakesmehappywhenI"msad.Singingsongscanmakeyouclever.Iamalwayssingingathometoshareeachothersjoysandsorrow(悲痛)inourlifeandtolearnmanysongs.Besides,IcanlearnEnglishbysingingEnglishsongs.Ireallyenjoysinging.

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat(毫無(wú)疑問(wèn))therearemanydifferentkindsofhobbiesandtheycannotonly(不僅)broaden(拓寬)ourminds(智力)butalso(而且)addmorefuntoourlife.（增加生活的樂(lè)趣）

4Myhobbyisreadingbooks.WhenIwassevenyearsold,Ibecameinterestedinreadingbooks.（對(duì)閱讀產(chǎn)生了興趣）Ilikereadingbooksbecausetherearealotofusefulthingsinbooks.Icanlearnalotofknowledgefrombooks.Bookscanalsoteachmehowtobeagoodperson.Booksevencansolvemanyproblemsforme.Iwillreadmoregoodbookstoimprovemyself.六、寫(xiě)人記事篇典型例句：

1…wasbornin+地點(diǎn)+in+月，年2….is1.68meterstallandweighs52kilos.3….comesfrom+地點(diǎn)

4…h(huán)asshorthair.…ismediumbuild(中等身材)。/infact,Imhealthyandstrong.5Attheageofsix,hebegantodosth.

6…isoutgoing(外向的).Everyonelikestotalkwithhim.Hegetsonwellwithus.(與…相處融洽)7描述老師：Hehasbeenteachingintheschoolforyears.…isknowledgeable.Heworksveryhard.(工作努力)Allofuslovetolistentohisclassbecausehehasagoodwaytomakehislessonsinteresting.…iskindtous,butverystrictwithusinourstudies.Heispatient,too.Heisagoodteacherandalsoagoodfriend.HeteachesusEnglish/mathsverywell.Heloveswatchingfootballgamesafterwork.(下班后).HeoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.

8I’mwritingtotellyouthatI’dliketoworkasavolunteerforthe16AsianGames.(想做…的志愿者)

9Ihavemanyhobbies,suchasdrawing,doingsports,singing,speeches,andspokenEnglish.10IamproudthatIwonthefirstprizeinourcity’sEnglishSpeechContestforMiddleSchoolStudentinDecember,201*.I(很驕傲在…中獲一等獎(jiǎng))

11IfIamluckyenoughtobecomeavolunteer,Iwilltrymybesttodothisjobwell.Pleasereplytomesoon(盡快回復(fù)我).Mytelephonenumberis05941356666.Yourssincerely

12回顧初中三年成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程，你一定有很多感受，從學(xué)習(xí)，生活，愛(ài)好等方面作出自我評(píng)價(jià)(畢業(yè)回顧評(píng)價(jià))

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Ihavestudiedinmymiddleschoolforthreeyears.Ihavelearnedalot.Ihavelearnednotonlyhowtomakefriendsbutalsohowtotalktoothers.Ihavemanyhobbies.Ilikesports.Ioftenplaybasketball,footballandvolleyballwithmyfriends.Footballismyfavorite.（這里參考上面

五、興趣與愛(ài)好稍微補(bǔ)充一下。）

Ofallmysubjects,IdobestinEnglishandChinese.(在所有學(xué)科中，…學(xué)得最好)…is/amhard-working/helpful/kind-hearted.(…刻苦用功/樂(lè)于助人/心地善良)…getsonwellwithsb.(與…相處融洽)communicatewithotherseasily.(容易與他人溝通)Butmymathandphysicsarealittleweak.IthinkIwilltrymybesttolearnthemwell.IhopeIcanstudyinNo.1HighSchool.（接著描述一下自己的夢(mèng)想和最后寫(xiě)點(diǎn)勵(lì)志方面的句子結(jié)束。參考四．語(yǔ)

言學(xué)習(xí)15條例句）

七．旅游和介紹地方1.LastSunday(Saturday,…),itwassunny(rainy,windy,foggy,)2Lastsummer,myparentsandIwentto…forourholidays.

3Igotupveryearly(late).AfterbreakfastIwentto…withmyfriendsbybike,bus，…4Weenjoyedourselves.Weforgotthetime.Wedidntcomebackuntil5o’clockintheafternoon.

5Weallfeltverytired,butwewerehappy.(…h(huán)adagoodtimethere.)

6IthoughtIwouldneverforgetthistrip.Weboughtalotofthings.

7.Thisisthe+形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞+thatIhaveeverseen/watched/got/received.ThisisthebestpresentthatIhaveeverreceived.(這是我收到的最好的禮物)8.Wevisitedalotofplacesofinterest。(名勝古跡)

9…isacitywithalonghistory.(歷史悠久的城市)Therearemanyplacesofinterestinit.

Nowletmetellyousomeofthem.

10…isintheeastof…,whichhasanareaof3.15km2.(占地面積)。Itis4.08kmlong,1.5km

wide.（長(zhǎng)…寬…）Itwilltakeyou20minutestogetto…fromthetravelportbyship.

11……iseducational.(有教育意義)Thezooisinterestingtovisit.Anditismoreinterestingtotravelaroundtheisland(環(huán)島游玩)eitheronlandorbyboat.

12Thereareallkindsoftreesandgrasseverywhere.（鳥(niǎo)語(yǔ)花香）

13It’sveryeasy/convenienttotravelto…(交通便利)Youcancomebybus,bytrain,orbyplane.

14Youcanspendadayortwohappilyhere.(愉快地呆上一兩天)

15Itisagoodplacetovisit.Visitorsfromallovertheworldcometovisititeveryyear.Wishyouagoodtrip.（是旅游的好地方，每年有大量的海內(nèi)外游客來(lái)旅游。）

八、新生事物評(píng)價(jià)典型例句：

1.Computerisbecomingmoreandmoreimportant.(越來(lái)越…)

2.weshouldmakegooduseofit.(充分利用3.Itmaybegetinthewayof(妨礙)ourstudy.4.Wecandolotsofthingswithit.(有多種方法來(lái)應(yīng)對(duì)/處理)

5.Itmakesourlifemoreeasy.（讓我們生活便捷）.keepintouchwithsb.Anddevelopourfriendship.與某人保持聯(lián)絡(luò)，發(fā)展友誼

6Inmyopinion,wecanbringmobilephonestoschool.

7.Nowadays(現(xiàn)如今)mobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongthemiddleschoolstudents.（手機(jī)在學(xué)生當(dāng)中正變得越來(lái)越受歡迎）

8Asweknow,the21stcenturyisamodernageandfullofinformation.（信息時(shí)代，.是信息社會(huì)）9Amobilephoneisoneofthequickesttoolsforustoexchangeinformation.（手機(jī)是最快的信息交流的工具之一。

10Themobilephoneisafashionableandusefulinvention,（時(shí)尚有用的發(fā)明）soweshouldmakethebestuseofit..應(yīng)充分利用好手機(jī)11Suppose(試設(shè)想)there’sasuddenaccident,（突發(fā)事件）itismoreconvenientforustodial(或callsomebody)forhelpimmediately(或quickly).如偶遇突發(fā)事故，可立即撥打手機(jī)求助。12There’realsosomegamesinthemobilephone.Wecanrelaxourselvesbyplayingthemwhenweretiredofourstudies.可在每天學(xué)習(xí)之余利用手機(jī)游戲放松一下自己。

13.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,…h(huán)avebothadvantagesanddisadvantages．(任何事物都有兩面性,…既有優(yōu)勢(shì)又有劣勢(shì))Inmyopinion,it’snotwrongtofollowthefashion,butthemostimportantthingishowtousethemobilephoneinarightway.只要正確使用好手機(jī)，緊跟時(shí)尚并無(wú)過(guò)錯(cuò)，追求時(shí)尚可以理解，但學(xué)習(xí)是首要任務(wù)。

反對(duì)意見(jiàn)：ButmyEnglishteacherdoesntthinkweshoulduseit。Itcostsmuchmoney.…cantconcentratemoreonyourstudy.Therearepublicphonesinourschool.Itsnotnecessarytobringit.

14、網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物DoingShoppingOnline

優(yōu)點(diǎn)：WiththehelpoftheInternet,(在...幫助下),shoppingisnotadifficultjob.Justclickyourmouse(點(diǎn)擊鼠標(biāo))tochoosethearticleyoulike,（選擇你喜歡的物品）andtheshoppingisfinished.Youneedn’tstepoutoftheroom.（走出家門）

缺點(diǎn)：Itseemseasyandquick.Butthere’salwaysatrap(陷阱)online.Ifyouarecareless,itwillbringyousometrouble.Youmayfindthecolorofthearticleisdifferentfromwhatyouwant,orthesizeiseithertoosmallortoobig.

Ifyouwanttobedifferent（與眾不同）,you"dbetternotbuyclothesonline.Once（一旦）youputontheclothesyouboughtonlineandgoout,youwillfindmanypeoplewearthesameclothesinthestreet.九、夢(mèng)想和未來(lái)

1.我的夢(mèng)想是當(dāng)一名醫(yī)生(mydreamisdoctor)

Iamanordinary（平凡的）person,Ihaveanordinarydream:tobeadoctor.Because。。。Atthesametime,Ibelievedthat.。。。Therefore,IhopeinthefutureIwillbeadoctor.2.以后十年內(nèi)我的生活

Intenyears,IthinkI"llbea.。。。Iwillliveinanapartmentwithmy。。。.BecauseIdon"tlikelivingalone.AndIcan。。。.Sointenyears,Iwillbeagood….IwillmeetalotofinterestingandfamouspeopleandIwillgotoanotherplacesonbusiness.（去其他地方出差）。Atthesametime,Iwanttogoabroadtodofurtherstudy(出國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)深造).Intenyears,Iwillhavemanydifferentpets.MaybeIwillkeepapetturtle.（養(yǎng)烏龜寵物）IthinkIwillgoshoppingwithmysisteraslongas(只要)Ihavetime.AndIwillgotolondononmyvacation.So,mylifeintenyearswillbebetterandbetter!

3上高中的打算(Theplanforthehighschool)

Firstly,Idescidetofinishmyhomeworkmorecarefullythanbefore.（決心比以前更認(rèn)真做作業(yè)）Andpaymoreattentiontotheknowledgewhichidon"tknowitclearly.（集中精力把模糊的知識(shí)弄懂）Secondly,Iwilldoalotofreadingtowidentherangeofmyknowledge,(大量閱讀擴(kuò)大知識(shí)視野)andtrytocombinethoerytopractice.（理論聯(lián)系實(shí)際）

Finally,Iwilllearntoadjust（調(diào)整，調(diào)節(jié)）tobemorepositive(積極的)andmorehelpful.(調(diào)整好狀態(tài)，積極樂(lè)觀、樂(lè)于助人)

其他短語(yǔ)：getonwellwith…/helpwitheachother…/learnfromothers。。。ThatswhatIplantodoinanewterm.（以上是我新學(xué)期的打算）

十、煩惱篇典型例句：

1.Iamsorrytohearthat……2.youshoudlearntoforget/relaxyourself（學(xué)會(huì)忘記/放松）3.youhadbetter(not)dosth.……最好做（不）某事)4youcanaskyourteacherforhelp5I"mafraidI"vegotabigproblemrecently.我最近很煩6Mymothertalkstoomuchtome.（嘮叨太多）Shealwaystellsme,"Becarefulwhilecrossingthestreet.""Putonmoreclothes.""Didyoudoagoodjobatschool?"andsoon.（在學(xué)校表現(xiàn)好嗎等等）I"mannoyed(煩惱)WhatshallIdo?

7Asateenager,Ihavemetthesameproblemasyou.(曾遇到過(guò)和你一樣的問(wèn)題)ButnowIcangetalongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideas/advicesforyou.（以下是我的建議）8Yourmothertalksmuch,becauseshecaresaboutyou（關(guān)心你）

9Maybeitsnotagoodway,butitshowsyourmotherslove.（也許這不是一個(gè)好方式，但至少表明媽媽愛(ài)你）

10SoIthinkyoushouldlistentoher（.聽(tīng)聽(tīng)她的看法）Ifyouropinionsaredifferentfromyourmother"s,（若意見(jiàn)不同）youcancommunicatewithher（和她溝通一下）,andtellherwhatyouarethinkingabout.（告訴她你的想法）

11Ifyourmotherdoesnttakeyouradvice,（不采納你的建議）justkeepsilentandgiveherasmile.（不要爭(zhēng)辯給她一個(gè)微笑）

12IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.(希望我的建議能對(duì)你有所幫助)

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