職高高考英語(yǔ)作文應(yīng)試技巧

職高高考英語(yǔ)作文應(yīng)試技巧房縣職業(yè)技術(shù)學(xué)校李軍

【摘要】以前英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)分依據(jù)是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確度而定，但近幾年要求“使用較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯”，因此要想得高分，除了要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確度以外，還必須在較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)的詞匯上有所表現(xiàn)。句式單一，缺乏生氣的文章，哪怕無(wú)任何錯(cuò)誤也不可能得高分，相反“有些錯(cuò)誤，但是為了使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致”，給分檔次仍在最高檔(21～25分)。

【關(guān)鍵詞】復(fù)雜句子高級(jí)詞匯卷面

每次給學(xué)生評(píng)講作文，筆者總把學(xué)生的作文比作前去求職的“面試者”，而改卷老師就是那前去招聘的“考官”，“考官”面對(duì)成千上萬(wàn)面試者，不一會(huì)就因枯燥而疲憊不堪，如何讓你這個(gè)面試者給考官留下好的印象而打高分呢？那只有你這個(gè)面試者必須要有出眾之處，讓“考官”眼前一亮，自然你的分?jǐn)?shù)就會(huì)讓你也眼前一亮。如何讓你這個(gè)面試者有出眾之處呢？

職高的學(xué)生，整體的作文都不好，如果你的作文錯(cuò)誤較少，就會(huì)顯得非常好了，如果你再能用幾個(gè)復(fù)雜的句子，高級(jí)的詞匯，那你就會(huì)很出眾了。筆者把它具體歸納如下：一、一篇好作文總體要求：1、一個(gè)漂亮引人的開(kāi)頭。例如：

【原文】I’magirl,I’m18yearsold,Ilikedancingandsinging,IwillgraduatefromFangxianVocationaltechnicalschoolthissummer.

【修正】I,an18-year-oldgirl,whoamfondofdancingandsingwillgraduatefromFangxianVocationaltechnicalschoolthissummer.2、2-3個(gè)復(fù)雜句子，3-4個(gè)高級(jí)詞匯的正文。3、一個(gè)正確無(wú)誤的結(jié)尾。4、一個(gè)整潔美觀的卷面。

二、復(fù)雜句子書(shū)寫(xiě)的常見(jiàn)方法，也是得高分的“亮點(diǎn)”。1、靈活運(yùn)用多種句式。

①運(yùn)用主從復(fù)合句：定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、主語(yǔ)從句、同位語(yǔ)從句。〔原文〕IdolikejoiningintheEnglishCorner.Itwasbuiltthreeyearsago.〔修正〕IdolikejoiningintheEnglishCornerwhichwasbuiltthreeyearsago.

②運(yùn)用倒裝句。如:

〔原文〕InotonlylearnEnglishinclassbutalsolearnitinmypart-time.〔修正〕NotonlydoIlearnEnglishinclassbutalsoinmypart-time.③運(yùn)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句

〔原文〕Wefeltveryveryhappywhenweweretogether.【修正〕Wedidfeelveryhappywhenweweretogether④運(yùn)用分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)。如:

〔原文〕WeoftenpractisespeakingEnglish,changeourideas,talkaboutourfavouriatesportsandsoon.

〔修正〕WeoftenpractisespeakingEnglish,changingourideas,talkingaboutourfavouriatesportsandsoon⑤適當(dāng)使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)

〔原文〕OurschoolheldanEnglishCornerthreeyearsago.

〔修正〕AnEnglishCornerwasbeingheldinourschoolthreeyearsago.⑥運(yùn)用由with或without引導(dǎo)的短語(yǔ)。2.通過(guò)分句和合句，增強(qiáng)句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力.

原文〕Wecanlearnspoken-English.Andwecantalkaboutinterestingthings.WealsotalkaboutlearningEnglishexperienceandso

[修]Wecanlearnspoken-English,talkingaboutinterestingthings,English-learningexperienceandsoon.3.學(xué)會(huì)使用過(guò)渡詞。如:

①遞進(jìn):then然后，besides還有，moreover此外，furthermore而且等。②轉(zhuǎn)折:however然而，but但是，onthecountry相反，afterall畢竟等。③總結(jié):finally最后，atlast最后，inconclusion最后，inbrief總之等。④強(qiáng)調(diào):indeed確實(shí)，certainly一定，surely確定，aboveall尤其三、如何使用”高級(jí)詞匯”:1.使用詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)代替單詞。如:[原文]IlikeEnglishCornerverymuch.

[修正]Iamkeenon/fondofEnglishCornerverymuch.2.使用一些很有“洋味”的單詞。如:

原文〕Anumberofstudentsalljoinintheactivitiesactively修正〕Manyastudenttakesanactivepartintheactivities.3.避免重復(fù)使用某一單詞或短語(yǔ)。如:

〔原文〕Wepracticespoken-English,talkaboutsomethinginteresting,weoftentalkaboutourexperience,too.

修正〕Wepracticespoken-English,talkingaboutsomethinginteresting,sharingourexperience,too.四、例文修改

介紹你們學(xué)校的情況：這是一所中等職業(yè)學(xué)校，有40多年的歷史，許多畢業(yè)生都已成名。全校有39個(gè)班，1600多學(xué)生，教職員工（faculty）近200人。校園很大而且美麗，四周綠樹(shù)環(huán)繞。有一座圖書(shū)大樓，兩座教學(xué)樓，一個(gè)大操場(chǎng)。老師對(duì)學(xué)生要求很嚴(yán)格，學(xué)生很尊敬老師。

Ourschool

（原文）Ourschoolisamediumvocationalschool.Ithasmorethanfortyyears’history.Manygraduatescomefromourschool,theyareveryfamousnow.

（修改）Ourschoolisasecondryvocationalschoolwithamorethan40-yearhistory.Manygraduateswhocomefromourschoolareveryfamousatpresent.（原文）Thereare39classesinourschool.Thenumberofthestudentsis1600.Andtherearetwohundredteachersandworkersinourschool

（修改）Thereare39classesinourschool.thenumberofthestudentsis1600,andnearly200facultiesareworkinghardinourschool.

（原文）Ourschoolisverybigandbeautiful.Therearemanytreesaroundourschool.Ourschoolhasaverybiglibrary.weoftenreadbooksinit.Twoteachingbuildingsandabigplaygroundareinourschool.

（修改）Ourcampusisfairlybigandbeautiful,aroundwhicharemanytrees,inwhicharealargeplayground,ahugelibrarywhereweoftenreadbooksandtwoteachingbuildings.

（原文）Theteachersinourschoolareverykind.Thestudentsareaskedverystrictlybytheirteachers.butthestudentsadmiretheirteachersveryvery

much.(110字）

（修改）Theteachersinourschoolareverykind,butthestudentsarerequiredverystrictlybyourteachers,andthestudentsdohonortheirteachersverymuch.(共107字）總結(jié)小語(yǔ)

我們不能為了長(zhǎng)句子而刻意書(shū)寫(xiě)與全文銜接不緊的長(zhǎng)句子，而應(yīng)是在書(shū)寫(xiě)完全文后，修改2-3個(gè)與全文連接順暢的長(zhǎng)句子，替換3-4個(gè)高級(jí)詞匯。牢記基本要求�。�！

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一、Greatchangesinmyhometown

Morethantwentyyearsago,myhometownwasjustasmall,oldandpoortown.Mostofpeoplewerefarmers.Therewerefewfactories.Thepeopledidn’thaveenoughfoodtoeatandworeoldclothes.Theyhadahardlife.

Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthepasttwentyyears.Thepeoplehavefoundalotofwaysofmakingmoney.Nowtherearemanytallbuildings.Theyareverybeautiful.Roadsarewideandclean.Peoplecantakebusesordrivetheirowncarstogotowork.Manypeoplehavecellphonesandpersonalcomputers.People’slivingconditionshaveimprovedalot.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts.myhometownisbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.

二、Savetheearth

Howtoprotecttheenvironmenthasbecomeoneofthebiggestproblemsintheworld.

It’sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Nomatterwherewelive,weshoulddosomethingtokeepourneighborhoodcleanandtidy.Wecancollectwastepaperorotherwastethingsforrecycling.Weshouldplantmoretreesandweshouldpreventthosefactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintorivers,lakesandfields.Weshouldn’tleaverubbisheverywhereandspitinpublicplaces.Wemustn’tpicktheflowersorsteponthegrassinpublic.Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautifulandourlifewillbebetterandbetter.

三、Improveourenvironment

Goodenvironmentcanmakepeoplefeelhappy.Toimprovetheenvironmentmeanstoqualifyourlife.Whatshouldwedotoimproveourenvironment?

Weshouldplantmoretrees.Andweshouldpreventthosefactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintorivers,lakesandfields.Wheneverweseelitterontheground,weshouldpickitupandthrowitintoadustbin.Don’tspitinpublicplaces.Don’tdrawonpublicwalls.It’sourdutytokeepourearthcleanandtidy.

四、Pollutionaroundus

Inrecentyearsourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.Butourenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.It’sverybadforourlife.Nowmanypeoplehaveair-conditionersandcars,theyproduce(giveoff)wastegas.Moreandmoretreesare

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beingcutdown.Therearesomuchsandontheearth(leavingonlysand).Weoftenseefactoriespourwasteintoriversorlakes.Waterintheriverisquitedirty.Wehaven’tenoughcleanwatertodrinkincities.Nowweareindanger.It’sverynecessaryandimportanttoprotecttheenvironmentwell.Ithinkifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful,andourlifewillbebetterandbetter.

五、Makeourworldmorebeautiful!

Protectingtheenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoreimportanttohumans.It’sourdutytotakecareofthenaturearoundus.Animalsandplantsareourbestfriends.,andweshouldsharetheworldwiththem.Weshouldn’tkillwildanimals,andwemustprotectforestsbecausetheyareanimals’home.Wemustplantmoretreesandgrass,theycanmaketheworldgreener.Themorebeautifultheworldis,thehappierliveswewillhave.Let’sdoourbesttomaketheworldbeautiful.

六、Keepourschoolclean

Wearestudyinginthisschool.Itisourdutytokeepitcleanandtidy.Itisnotgoodtospitinpublicplaces,suchasinthelibrary,intheclass.Weshouldn’tleaverubbishhereandthere.Don’tdrawpicturesonthewall,theyinfluencethelookofourschool.Weshouldkeeptheclassroomcleanandtidy.Andweshoulddosomecleaningoften.Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosomethingusefulforourschool,I’msureourschoolwillbemorebeautiful.

七、Mycountrylife

Iliketoliveinthecountryside.Iliveinasmallvillage.Thereisarivernearit.Lotsoftreesarearoundmyhouse.Icanseealotoffarmsandbirds.Thereislessnoise.Theairhereiscleanerandfresher.Therearefewercars.Ireadaloudearlyinthemorning.Whenitisgettingdark,themoonisbrightinthesky.It’sveryquiet.WhataniceplaceIlivein!

八、HowtolearnEnglishwell

Asweknow,Englishhasbecomeaninternationallanguage.ItismorepopularthananyotherlanguageinChina.Englishiswidelyspokenintheworldanditisthemostusefullanguagearoundtheworld.Buthowtolearnitwell?

Thebestwayistouseitallthetime.IfwecantalkinEnglish,thinkinEnglishwecanlearnitwell.Atschool,weshouldlearntohear,speak,readandwritecarefully.WeshouldspendenoughtimeinpracticingEnglish.IfwekeeponworkinghardatEnglish,wewillbeabletobegoodatitoneday.

九、HowIlearnEnglish

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Hello,everyone.ItismyhonortotalkwithallofyouabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.IlikeEnglishverymuch.Ialwayspreviewandmasterthemainideaofthelessonbeforeclass.Inclass,Ilistencarefully,speakloudlyandwritecarefullyandtakenotesifnecessary.Afterclass,Idomyhomeworkcarefully.IwatchEnglishmoviesandlistentoEnglishsongs.IhavebookedanEnglishnewspaper.It’sTimesEnglishPost,Icanlearnalotfromit.IamnotafraidofrememberingthenewwordsbecauseImastermanygoodmethods.IhopeyouworkhardatEnglishandmakeprogresseveryday.That’sall.

十、HowIimprovedmyEnglish

WhenIbegantolearnEnglish,Iwaspooratit.Iwasquiteworriedatthattime.LaterI1istenedtotheteacherattentivelyinclass,andmadenotescarefully.IfIhadanyquestion,IaskedmyEnglishteacherormyclassmatesforhelp.EverymorningIreadtheEnglishtextsaloudandlistenedtotheEnglishtapes.Intheevening,afterfinishingmyhomework,IalwaysreadsomeEnglishandmagazines.

NowIamoneofthebeststudentsatEnglishinmyclass.

十一、TheimportanceofEnglish

Englishisthemostwidelyspokenintheworld.It’sspokenbymostpeopleintheUSA,GreatBritain,Canada,Australia,andNewZealand.It"salsoverywidelyusedasaforeignlanguageinmanyothercountriesoftheworld.It"swidelyusedforbusinessbetweendifferentcountries.MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish,too.Itisreallyabridgetosomuchknowledge.Englishisusedbytravellersandbusinesspeoplearoundtheworld.It"soneoftheworld"smostimportantlanguagesasitissowidelyused.That"swhymoreandmorepeopleinChinaareinterestedinlearningEnglish.

Englishissousefulthatwemustlearnitwell.Nowlet’sworkhardatitandseewholearnsitfasterandbetterinourclass.

十二、Iwanttobeaninventor

TVs,telephone,fridges,cars,planes,computersandmanyotherthingsareimportantinventions.Theyhavegreatlychangedourlife.Manypeoplehavetheirideasandwishes.Theywanttoinventsomenewthingsfortheworld.Iamoneofthem.Iwanttobeaninventorinthefuture,Inventionscanbringfunandhappinesstoourlifeandmakeourdailylifemoreconvenient.Ourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter.NowIamahighschoolstudent.Iwilltrymybesttoworkhardatmylessonstomakemydreamcometrue.

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十三、Iwanttobeatourguide

IwanttobeatourguidebecauseBeijingwillhostthe201*OlympicGames.TherewillbemanypeopletocometoChinafromallovertheworld.Mostofthemdon’tknowChinese.TheywanttovisitmanyinterestingplacesinChina.Icanbeoneoftheguides.Icanmakemuchmoney,too.HowhappyIwillbe!Sofromnowon,Imuststudyhard.IamgoingtolearnEnglisheveryday.Iwilltrymybesttomakeitcometrue.

十四、IliketheInternet

TheInternetisplayinganimportantpartinourdailylife.It’sveryuseful.IoftensearchtheInternetforsomeinformation.Icanreadthelatestnews,dosomeshopping,andgetallkindsofinformationfromit.IcanalsodownloadtheinformationthatIneedandIcansende-mailsandmaketelephonecallstomyfriendsontheinternet.ThemostimportantthingisthatIamabletostudyallmylessonsontheInternet.

TheInternetmakesmylifemoreinterestingandcolorfulandithasawideeffectonmystudyanddailylife.Iliketheinternetverymuch.Howaboutyou/Willyouhaveatry?

十五、TheInternet

TheInternetisbecomingmoreandmoreimportanttous.Withoutit,wecan’tdoworkbetter.Wecangoshoppingwithoutgoingoutofourhouses.AndwecanlistentomusicorwatchmoviesontheInternet.Itcanalsohelpalotwithourstudy.Wecanlearnmuchknowledgeondifferentsubjects,andgetinformationassoonaspossible.Butnow,someofuswork,studyorplayontheInternetforlongtime,especiallyforyoungpeopletoplaycomputergames.It’sbadforoureyesandhealth.IfwemakegooduseoftheInternet,itwillbeourbestfriendsandhelpusalot.

十六、Computer

Computerisawonderfulmachine.It"sagreatinventioninmanyyears.Itdevelopsveryquickly.Thesmallestcomputerisasbigasanote-book.Wecallitpocketcomputer.Computerbecomesmoreandmoreimportantinmanyways.Ithastouchedthelivesofeveryone,evenpeopleinfarawayvillages.Ithelpsustodowithallkindsofinformationandwegetknowledgefromit.Itcangiveusalotfun.

十七、Theimportanceofwater

Ofallthethingsweeatanddrink,wateristhemostimportant.Wecanlivewithoutfoodformanydays,buttwoorthreedayswithoutwater,usuallymakespeopledie.

However,notallofpeopleunderstandthis.Theykeepthrowingrubbishintotheriversorlakes.Somefactoriesevenpourwastewaterintotheriver.Asaresult,manyriversandlakeshavebecome

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sodirtythatthewaterisnolongersafeforpeopletodrink.

Let’sdoourbesttokeepthewatercleantosaveourselves.

十八、Water

Waterisveryimportantforourlife.Everydayweusewatertodrink,toocookandtowash.Waterisnecessaryforallplants.Theyneedwatertogrow.Peoplecan’tlivewithoutwater.Plantswilldiewithoutwater.Itisimportanttoalllivingthings.However,manypeoplepollutelakesandriverswithwastewater,sowemuststopsomepeopleorsomefactoriesfromwastingwaterorpollutingwaterandhelpkeepthewaterclean.Atthesametimeweshouldsaveasmuchwateraspossible.

十九、Ilikesports

Ifeelthattakingexerciseisgoodforourhealth.IoftenfelttiredwhenIwasstudyingbefore.FromthistermIkeeponrunningwhenIgetupinthemorning.AfterclassIoftengotoplaybasketballwithmyfriends.NowIfeelmuchbetterthanbeforeandIneverfeeltiredwhenIamstudyingAndIimprovealotinmylessons.Sopleasetakeexerciseasoftenaspossible.

二十、Introduceyourself

MynameisLiLei.IwasborninFuzhouonDecember15,201*.I’mstudyingatYucaiMiddleSchool.IlearnChinese,math,English,physics,chemistry,politics,andsoon.IlikeEnglishbest.Myfavoritesportisfootball.Myhobbiesaredrawingandcomputer.I’mveryhappytoliveinahappyfamily.Thereare3peopleinmyfamily.Myfatherisadoctor.Mymotherisateacher.Weloveeachotherverymuch.

二十一、Mybestfriend

Mybestfriendis---Heis15yearsold.Wearebothinthesameclass.Heworksveryhard.Heisneverlateforschoolandhedoeswellinallhislessons.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Mymathisverypoor,soheoftenhelpsmewithmymathafterclass.Hisparentsarebothteachers.Theyareverybusy,soheoftenhelpsdothehouseworkathome.Heisalittleshorterthanmebutheisverystrong.Helikesplayingfootballverymuchatschool.Weoftenplayfootballtogetherandheplaysitprettywell.Hegetsonwellwithus.Everyoneinourclasslikeshim.

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